Extended - First crit

From our first crit we received feedback on the initial character designs as well as the concept for our script, before it is developed further. People seemed to like my character designs so far which is good. We also showed the group our concept for when the cameras switches to Zorinas phone camera.

Because the script is still in the works, we showed a quick timeline of events that would happen for the group to get an understanding of our project.

These concepts were created by Tess and Meg, and recieved some good feedback. 

Because the animatic is almost put together, we are worried because it is already over 3 minutes long, but we feel that the timing and spacing will be sorted once we actually animate and record out voices for the animation