At the moment, Tess is working on the script further with both mine and Jay's input from time to time. I created my storyboards for the transition shot of Keith putting up posters around the town, as well as his first interview scene.
When I presented the storyboard to jay and Tess, I told them about how I didn't think the shot really worked and how it didn't seem like a documentary thing to happen. So we decided to keep it more simple and have it more discreet. I decided to take away the shop keeper, and just have it as a simple transition shot where Keith would just put the poster up and pout.
Because I was going off the script that wasn't finalised, this scene seemed a bit confusing. The shots were too much, and the actions that was wanted of Keith seemed too much also. We decided to simplify the scene by taking away a lot of the glancing shots to level out the comedic timing.
In this scene, Keith is supposed to be interviewing a stranger who then goes off on a rant. The rant would then be edited to make it sound like the stranger is saying nice things to Keith instead. There is supposed to be an old lady in the background who, because the scene is clearly edited, would move around. We decided to take away the second green screen gag because again, it seemed too much.
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